Thursday, October 4, 2012

Im , what do you think about my poem?


Question


Im , what do you think about my poem?
i feel invisible around you.


Answer


Its a cute peom. I think you should write a new one about the same thing becasue this one kinda has a bad rythm to it.brbrdont let anyone tell you that your poems suck because there good to write, can use work but its a start. dont stop writing.



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